"It feels like it lacks big picture understanding. It focuses on the emotional shock value instead of the ways these experiences bring about a change. Too little substance. Should be a documentary. Subject matter may be way above the group’s ability. Group has a goal but no story. Does this all happen in one day, week or month? Needs to be simplified. Did quite a fair bit of research. Oral sex segment may be an issue for clearance/funding. Is this fictional/documentary. There’s authenticity but they have to reevaluate the story."
That is what happens when u lecturers don't LISTEN.
i need this.
please.
listen...